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[rj_anderson]

• 12:35 I may have figured out how to unpick the knot of the last chapter. I just hope it isn't too wordy now... but easier to cut than add, right? #

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[shoebox2.livejournal.com]

I think so. To me it'd depend on whether you're using too much description as a substitute for action.

[erinbow.livejournal.com]

Hey, go you!
How did it work out?

[rj-anderson.livejournal.com]

I think I got done what I needed to do for this first draft, in terms of making it as good as I know how to at present... I know it can be better, though, and look forward to my editor telling me how to make it so.