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(Points to anybody who not only recognizes the quote in the subject line, but can supply the correct response.)

In spite of feeling physically horrible and emotionally stuffed-up, I have to say that looking over my editor's suggested revisions for Knife today has been a great kick in the mental pants. Over the last couple of hours I've experienced a cascade of new ideas, and I'm really excited now about the prospect of making them work. Some of them mean chopping out and/or replacing bits of the story which have been in place for literally fifteen years -- but the new ideas I've got are so much better, tighter, more economical and even more interesting* that it makes me wonder why on earth I didn't think of them before.

This is the best part of writing, for me -- not the initial getting-stuff-on-paper stage, but the discovery of how much better the story can be with a good revision. And since I have now revised Knife at least ten times, it's a good thing I can still find a spark of excitement in the thought of cutting old scenes and writing new ones.

Now ask me if I still feel that way in six weeks.

***

On a related note, you know how I was whining about not getting my revisions earlier? When I was lamenting to my mother about the courier mix-up, she said, "There must be a reason behind all this," and as much as the cliche made me want to grind my teeth at the time, I've come to believe she was right.

See, I had an insanely busy weekend, and if the revision package had come on Thursday or Friday as planned, it would have been just one more source of agonizing distraction. I had no time to work on the book, and there were a whole lot of other responsibilities and commitments I needed to deal with first.

Even this morning would have been too early. I was too full of worries about fixing the airline ticket problems and coping with my kids to concentrate. My agent called mid-morning, and when I told him about my courier woes he said, "Well, at least you have Catherine's revision letter to look at, even if you don't have her comments on the manuscript. ... Oh, you don't have it? Well then, I'll forward you a copy straight away." Which he did, but! -- this has never happened before, not with my agent, but for some Mysterious Reason that e-mail spent a few hours wandering around the sub-ether instead of showing up in my mailbox. So, again -- no revisions.

By the time I'd fed the kids lunch and put the youngest down for his nap, I was completely frazzled. And at that point I realized I just had to let go of the whole thing. I ended up praying, "Lord, You send the revision package when You think I'm ready, because the truth is I feel like crud right now and I know I'm not really prepared, so maybe it's a good thing after all that it's not here." And instead of peering out the window and checking my e-mail every two minutes, I sat my two oldest down with a Tintin cartoon and then spent the next hour and a half resting, reading, and praying. After which I felt much calmer...

...and just a few minutes after that, the package arrived.

Really, you'd almost think it was planned.

*cough*

--
* In fact, at least one of them is making me grin with the anticipation of writing it. Just imagine the faery equivalent of Sydney Bristow stealing a Rambaldi artifact while her partner provides some kind of outrageous distraction, and you'll get the idea.

Date: 2007-12-04 02:33 am (UTC)
sarahsan: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sarahsan
Mr. Smee, in the 1991 Stephen Spielberg film Hook, to Capt. J.A.S. Hook, who replies wearily, "Well, that must hurt."

I'm going to actually go read your post, now...^_^;;
Edited Date: 2007-12-04 02:35 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-12-04 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rj-anderson.livejournal.com
You win! I knew I could count on the geekery of my f-list.

(But can I count on anybody else finding Robin Williams disturbingly attractive in the role of Peter Pan? That is the question. Goodness knows I'd never found him attractive before. Or since.)

Date: 2007-12-04 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lydaclunas.livejournal.com
Ew, RJ, seriously? O_o

Date: 2007-12-04 03:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rj-anderson.livejournal.com
*looks at shoes in an embarrassed fashion*

No, wait. It's like... it's like my being suddenly attracted to Rowan Atkinson when he played the Ninth Doctor!

Yeah. That's the ticket.

Date: 2007-12-04 02:45 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sarahsan
It's the tights, somehow. And the wind-ruffled hair.

At least, I reallyreally HOPE that explains it all...

Date: 2007-12-04 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rj-anderson.livejournal.com
I couldn't say exactly -- it's been years, after all. And admittedly, I just have a knee-jerk Peter Pan Thing, similar to my Sherlock Holmes Thing. It takes really bad casting to cancel that out.

Date: 2007-12-04 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lydaclunas.livejournal.com
*cackles* What about the Internet's Peter Pan, eh? :D

Date: 2007-12-04 12:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rj-anderson.livejournal.com
Now that is Really Bad Casting. :D

Date: 2007-12-04 01:14 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
What did you think of this most recent version of Peter Pan with Jason Isaacs as Mr. Darling/Captain Hook? I enjoyed how they reverted to the tradition of having the same actor play both roles. (And Isaacs is delicious in almost any role . . .)

Mary Anne

Date: 2007-12-04 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalquessa.livejournal.com
*squishes Smee* How did the world get along with Dustin Hoffman as Hook for so long, I ask you?

Date: 2007-12-04 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lydaclunas.livejournal.com
"I just had an apostrophe."

"I think you mean an epiphany."

Date: 2007-12-04 02:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lydaclunas.livejournal.com
Okay, so those are the words before. But whatever.

Date: 2007-12-04 03:09 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-12-04 02:44 am (UTC)
kerravonsen: Three camels with riders: WISE MEN still seek Him (wise-men-seek-him)
From: [personal profile] kerravonsen
8-)

Date: 2007-12-04 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tezmilleroz.livejournal.com
That's the thing about mothers - they tend to be right... which means you still know better than your own children ;-)

Have a lovely day! :-)

Date: 2007-12-04 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cesario.livejournal.com
for "subject line" I read "icon" and just spent the last several moments trying to dredge up the rest of Jeremiah 29:11 from the recesses of my memory. I got as far as "to prosper and not to harm you" when I hit the comments and realized my mistake.

Date: 2007-12-04 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yahtzee63.livejournal.com
It is a strange but true rule of fiction that the more any given thing resembles Alias, the snazzier it becomes. :D

I'm so glad you got good revisions!

Date: 2007-12-04 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wahlee-98.livejournal.com
I love Smee. :D

I'm glad the revisions are making you excited. When I get editorial comments, it tends to make me depressed. I think I don't take criticism well.

Maybe that's why my thesis is still in the hypothetical stage. . . :P

Date: 2007-12-04 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] olmue.livejournal.com
Good luck and happy revising! I'm glad it worked out in the end.

Date: 2007-12-04 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalquessa.livejournal.com
Really, you'd almost think it was planned.

*cough*


*laughs* Things like this are very reassuring in retrospect, even if they can be crazy-making when they're happening. Praise be to God for how much care he takes of us.

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