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...of the kinds of revisions I actually ended up making to TPMA, the OotP-related stuff was actually the least of it. Doing this gave me the chance to fix a couple of continuity errors, some wobbly characterization, and overwritten passages that had been bothering me even before Book 5 came out.
So the keen-eyed reader will now observe that: ( Spoilerettes ho! )
I'm still not completely happy with the story in the light of OotP -- I'd need to do a lot more actual rewriting and reimagining of scenes for that -- but at least I've fixed all the obvious discrepancies. Or at least I hope I have.
So the keen-eyed reader will now observe that: ( Spoilerettes ho! )
I'm still not completely happy with the story in the light of OotP -- I'd need to do a lot more actual rewriting and reimagining of scenes for that -- but at least I've fixed all the obvious discrepancies. Or at least I hope I have.
