The Haiku of Reasonable Comfort

[rj_anderson]

LiveJournal Haiku!
Your name:	synaesthete7
Your haiku:	at his black velvet coat and pushing the dark hair back from his face as
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Created by Grahame

Second try:

why wouldn't you listen
he demanded of the speech
and his heavy brows

But on the third try I got this, much more personally appropriate, little gem:

more checkmate cries i
was busy last night and this
morning and never

Not only is it a good description of the way Simon's ear-piercing yells tend to stop me from getting any work done, "checkmate cries" sounds like a fragment of a Talk Talk lyric. Heh.

Comments

[sff-corgi.livejournal.com]

This is a witty little piece of code, isn't it? (I like your second iteration best, myself.)

Hmmm... wonder if copperbadge has seen this....