Of This and Other Worlds

Keeping in mind that I'm just now following your Indigo dialog and that opinions are like a##hol##s, we all have them, the Dr. Faraday sentence stops the flow for me. Though as you stated earlier, I too, love his name. I felt like you were trying to cram him into your five or so sentences. Perhaps less compound/complex and a few more simple structures work better. Also, the use of the term asylum is awkward for me. Is this a Canuck thing? If a duck is a duck, call it a duck. Mental hospital? Mental facility? Asylum dates it for me like the term Bedlam. Just my two cents worth, correct me or ignore me. I don't mind. :D