I'm really, really liking the new prologue and chapter one. I only got to read the first 4 chapters before (I still have them saved on my harddrive), but I was so interested even by those several-revisions-ago chapters that I wish I could have read the rest. :) Now, with the improvements you made in characterization, story arc, and just plain mystery and intrigue. . . I can't WAIT until you find a publisher and I can pimp your books to all my friends. :)
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Date: 2006-10-01 12:12 am (UTC)