I'll just say "ditto" to this reaction. The first couple of paragraphs were a little hard slogging, but by the end of the Prologue I was definitely hooked. I don't know what editors say about how long you have to capture the interest of your age group, but I would hope you get more than two paragraphs. ;-)
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Date: 2006-06-24 11:41 pm (UTC)