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Thanks to some helpful comments from ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
logastellus and others, I ended up reworking a couple of scenes in the last post. You may or may not want to check that out, but in any case here's a link to Part One for those who missed it.
And now, on to Part Two:
( "You can't be serious," said Foreman... )
Thanks again tologastellus, and also to lizbee, for early comments. Feedback is my friend.
logastellus and others, I ended up reworking a couple of scenes in the last post. You may or may not want to check that out, but in any case here's a link to Part One for those who missed it.And now, on to Part Two:
( "You can't be serious," said Foreman... )
Thanks again to
logastellus, and also to lizbee, for early comments. Feedback is my friend.
