It took me a bit longer than usual to get this one trimmed into shape, but
amylud's great criticisms made the difference.
( ALIAS: What You Never Knew You Wanted, 6/? )
Part Seven, unless I'm very much mistaken, should be the end. Thanks to everyone who's shown an interest in the story, and do please feel free to make whatever comments and criticisms come to mind!
Oh, and the in-joke referenced in the first few lines is fairly obvious, I think, but I'll still give House Points to the first one who guesses right. :)
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( ALIAS: What You Never Knew You Wanted, 6/? )
Part Seven, unless I'm very much mistaken, should be the end. Thanks to everyone who's shown an interest in the story, and do please feel free to make whatever comments and criticisms come to mind!
Oh, and the in-joke referenced in the first few lines is fairly obvious, I think, but I'll still give House Points to the first one who guesses right. :)
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