I think it looks awesome, but my eye keeps drifting to that penultimate paragraph - I think 'some of which have been published in charity anthologies...' would read better (I always refer to the ones I've been in as charity anthologies, I don't know, maybe I should change mine), and I'm not sure about your use of the word 'pro' - the fact you name them is probably enough to intimate that they are published professional writers, even if they're not familiar to the person reading the pitch (and I'd imagine that Duane especially should be). To make the distinction that they are 'pro' reinforces the idea that you, regrettably, are not.