ext_45215 ([identity profile] rose-in-shadow.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rj_anderson 2006-06-27 11:21 pm (UTC)

Total LOVE.

The best change I noticed was Bryony's note. It's much more to the point and still leaving enough mystery for a reader to wonder what's going on.
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