Something that didn't make it into the last part of "What You Never Knew You Wanted", because my concept for the scene changed halfway through the writing process -- but it was such fun to write I couldn't resist sharing anyway.

Part Five Outtake )

Alas, I had to murder this darling when I realized I'd be adding a whole bunch of unnecessary running around just for the sake of one joke... not to mention that the mood didn't really fit the rest of the scene. So no great loss.
I'd totally forgotten that I ever wrote this. But it occurred to me that some of my Whovian readers might enjoy it, so here it is -- an outtake from my Fifth Doctor story Irresistible Force:

Somehow, some time, we make it back to my place... )

The scene derailed the action and the story was already long enough, so I ruthlessly cut this part out. But in retrospect, I rather like it.

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